Friday, July 7, 2017

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Thursday, July 6, 2017

Surprise! Another Picture Book Post


The animals on the farm are preparing to celebrate a birthday. But duckling isn't quite sure how to prepare for a birthday party since he's never experienced one. The sheep are snippity-clipping, the chickens are shimmy-shaking. But what should duckling be doing?

Not only did I choose to post this book because it's cute, but also to show that not all books (as I'm sure you know) follow the rules that authors are taught to use when writing. You may want to refer to my previous post regarding feedback that I received from an agent on one of my picture book manuscripts. The bold print indicates recommendations to my manuscript. The regular print refers to Click, Clack, Surprise!.

  • I needed "more suspense in the beginning" 
    • There is some suspense in the beginning of Click, Clack, but minimal
  • I needed "tension with higher stakes in the middle"
    • no tension (that I could tell)
  • I needed "more character growth"
    • if duckling grew it was on the last page
  • While I didn't post anything about this earlier, as authors we are always told to have the main character solve his/her own problem.
    • character growth only on last page
So, while I wholeheartedly recommend Click, Clack, Surprise!, I wanted to point out that if you have a certain feel and love for what you are creating, don't immediately dismiss it because it doesn't follow the guidelines you've been taught. One of the best examples of this is the Harry Potter series. This book didn't sell quickly, but when it did it flew to the top of the charts and exceeded all expectations.

My thoughts are to follow the guidelines, but if your heart says to veer off the path, I say Go For It!






Wednesday, July 5, 2017

On Writing Picture Books


Though they look short and simple, picture books can be challenging to write. I know that first hand, from replies I've received from agents.

"...I especially enjoyed the humor and know that the illustrations will expand in greater depth visually. Overall, this is entertaining for young readers.
Here's where the but comes in:
"When considering your story further, I'm wanting more suspense in the beginning, a tad more tension with higher stakes in the middle, and more depth in the end. For plot I'd like to see more character growth . . . "
Don't misunderstand me. This personal reply is very encouraging. But I want to reply, "Hello, I've read so many non-exciting picture books with no plot or . . . ." well, you know what I mean. It's a tough business, but one I find exciting.

My suggestion for you is to read lots of picture books to see what's being published. Some books will make you chuckle and marvel at an author's creativity; you might even consider that he/she is totally out of your league. But other books will cause you to shake your head. That being said, I still recommend you read and find authors who inspire your creative thoughts. Sometimes writing is in your blood. You've got to do it! If that happens to be how you feel, I understand.

I will be posting picture books that match my style and ones that I hold up as examples of good writing. I will also share some great articles to guide you through the writing process.

You may want to look at the picture books I've recommended in the past, as well.

Want to write a good children's book? Here are 7 tips to guide you


Saturday, May 27, 2017

Those Darn Squirrels

Love good Picture Books with sequels? Then these books are winners, especially if you’ve ever watched squirrels raid your bird feeders and thought, Those Darn Squirrels.  Look at the covers of these books. They just about say it all, don’t they?  What? you say.  You can’t judge a book by its cover. Well, if it makes you smile, usually you can.

Old Man Fookwire (so old that dust comes out his nose when he sneezes) is a grump who likes birds. With lots and lots of bird feeders, he is able to attract more birds. And what could be better than birds unless it’s painting birds? But Old Man Fookwire soon realizes he is attracting squirrels, too. And those pesky squirrels are smart!




All of the books are filled with cute illustrations that children and adults will love. Those Darn Squirrels and the Cat Next Door and Those Darn Squirrels Fly South are sequels to Those Darn Squirrels

Author: Adam Rubin

Illustrator: Daniel Salmieri




Monday, May 1, 2017

Young Authors Conference

Saturday, April 29, I had the pleasure of participating in the 32nd Annual Young Authors
Conference at Fort Osage School District. Many school districts have discontinued this learning opportunity for students, but I  commend Fort Osage for seeing the importance and finding a way to make it happen.








It thrills me to experience their undivided attention and passion for something that I love as well.

Thanks, Fort Osage School District for another enjoyable day.

Friday, April 7, 2017

Mark Twain Readers Award 2016-17: A Million Ways Home



I am so happy to be able to share that my Goodreads friend Dianna Dorisi Winget won the 2016-17 Mark Twain Readers Award for her book, A Million Ways HomeThis terrific book was chosen as a finalist on five other state lists as well. The books on this list are then read and voted on by students throughout the school year. Congratulations Missouri students for choosing a great book!

Missouri's Association of School Librarians (MASL) offers four different reader awards broken down by age groups.
A Million Ways Home
http://diannawinget.com/sliver-of-sun.php
A Sliver of Sun
A Smidgen of Sky
Show Me Readers Award (Grades 1-3)
Mark Twain Readers Award (Grades 4-6)
Truman Readers Award (Grades 6-8)
Gateway Readers Award (Grades 9-12)

I have to agree with so many readers. This book made my list too. I loved it. In fact, I purchased it so I wouldn’t have to borrow it from the library. Dianna’s writing is exceptional. Not often do I read a book that brings out so much emotion in such a short time. After reading A Million Ways Home I decided to search for more of her writing. In all honesty, when I started reading A Smidgen of Sky I was certain I was going to be disappointed since nothing could live up to the first book I’d read of hers. However, it only took a few pages to fall in love with that book too. And now I’m anxious to read the sequel: A Sliver of Sun

So what does Dianna do besides write? Check out her cool website to find out.



Wednesday, April 5, 2017

Ten Things To Check Before Sending Your Story To An Editor or Publisher




 When you finally type the last sentence of your story, the story you’ve wrung your hands over and spent sleepless nights thinking about, do you find yourself anxious to send it off? I usually breathe a sigh of relief, close my eyes, and imagine my book on the New York Times bestseller list. Well, no, not really. Actually I don’t dream that big. I do, however, imagine an immediate call from a publisher or agent because they’re afraid someone will grab my book first. With that dream in mind, it’s important to carry my phone at all times so I don’t miss that all-important call.
If you, like me, get over anxious to share your new best seller, you might want to slow down and run through this list of 10 things to watch for. 

1.   Just: Just is a word I find myself overusing. Even though it seems to flow naturally in my writing, in most cases I eliminate many of them when I do my final edit.  And, yes, it causes me grief to hit the delete key. I just find it to be a comforting word that just slips in my sentences just like a thief in the night. 

2.      That: This is another sneaky one. Again, do a word search or when proof-reading watch for unnecessary words that feel right, but don’t belong. 

3.      Exclamation Points: Good writing should have little or no exclamation points. Let your writing show excitement; don’t rely on punctuation marks. 

4.      Redundant Phrases: Eliminate phrases like “completely filled,” “difficult dilemma,” “false pretense,” “past history,” “written down,” “blend together,” and “brief moment.” Probably the ones that bother me the most when I read them are “brief moment” and “brief second.” Aren’t moments and seconds always brief? Another that I sometimes write without thinking is “stand up.” In most cases stand down doesn’t apply. We can usually assume a person only has one direction to stand. For a more complete list Goggle Redundant Phrases. 

5.      Adjectives and Adverbs: Adding lots of adjectives and adverbs to your writing can slow down reading and eventually irritate a reader. Instead chose descriptive nouns and verbs. Use adjectives and adverbs sparingly. 

6.      Said and asked are good words to use with dialog: Using barked, gushed, hissed, purred, growled, whimpered, and shouted to describe how a sentence is presented can be very distracting. In fact, the book I was reading yesterday had a sentence followed by “he hissed.” I actually tried to hiss the sentence as I said it. Impossible. Don’t try to entertain your readers with fancy words. The words will take away from your dialog by jumping at the reader. Said and asked blend in and go unnoticed. 

7.      Showing vs. Telling: This can be challenging sometimes, at least to me. When you feel the need to add some words after your dialog (see above) to tell how your character feels, instead you could show how the character feels by having him clinch his hands several times and bite his lip. You are now showing his emotions. Then follow the sentence with said; the reader won’t notice said, but can feel the emotion by the characters actions. This goes for other parts of your story as well. Be careful not to tell too much backstory, etc. Most reader like action.

8.      If it’s not necessary, axe it: It can be hard to delete great scenes or wonderful dialog that you’ve created. But when you read the story aloud, and it’s always a good idea to do that, if it slows down the forward momentum and serves no purpose, grit your teeth and grab the axe. 

9.      Watch passive voice and change to active: Sometimes this can be hard for me to grasp. Basically passive is where the subject is acted upon by the verb. Example: The TV channel was changed by Bill. Active is where the subject does the action. Example: Bill changed the channel. Looking for “ing” words can be a start to locating passive sentences. Example: She was crossing the road when he saw her. Consider changing this to, He saw her as she crossed the road. This is a helpful site. 

10.  Who and That: I find this mistake in books from noted publishers, and it really bothers me. People are followed by who.  The boy who lives down the street. Not The boy that lives down the street. Things are followed by that. The car that followed him was dark blue. Make sure to watch for this mistake, since I think many are using the wrong word.

After taking weeks and months to create, who wants to read the same thing over and over? But trust me, if you put away your work and pull it out in a few days, you will see glaring things that you didn’t notice the first time through.

Happy editing!