Saturday, October 28, 2017

Bruce's Big Move


Grumpy Bruce seems to be gaining family members when all he thinks he wants is to be left alone. In book one of this series, he ends up adopting geese, something that happened quite by accident. In the second book, three mice who had been renting out Bruce's home (unbeknownst to him) while he was down south with the geese decide that being part of the family works for them. What's a bear to do when guests just won't leave? Bruce packs up his goslings and decides to move, leaving the mice behind, since his current house has become too crowded, loud and chaotic.  But will it be that simple?

The characters are so much fun in Bruce's Big Move, and Ryan T. Higgin's illustrations are bound to make you smile. There's something special about a home, even if it's noisy, chaotic and messy!

Disney . Hyperion 2017
Ages: 5-6


Friday, October 27, 2017

Yet Another Cute Halloween Picture Book

Tis the season for fun Halloween picture books!

Otter is preparing for the season: putting up decorations, picking out pumpkins, and making costumes for Teddy and Giraffe. But it doesn't take long for Otter to discover that the trick-or-treaters who come to the door are scary. Too scary for her to help hand out candy. In fact, she suddenly remembers she has lots of important things to do under the bed upstairs. But the idea is to enjoy the holiday. Will she and Otter Keeper be able to find a way to make Halloween a little less scary? 

The illustrations are bright and kid-friendly. The text is easy to understand and can encourage little ones who might be a bit nervous about Halloween.

Otter Loves Halloween, written and illustrated by Sam Garton, is a great bedtime story or classroom book for this time of year.

Balzer & Bray
An Imprint of Haper Collins Publishers, 2015
Ages: 4 - 8


Thursday, October 26, 2017

Getting Your Writing Critiqued

While writing is, for the most part, a solitary endeavor, I've found that it can also be helpful to step back from your work and recieve feedback. But here's the tricky part, it has to be constructive feedback, and it can't destroy that part of you that makes the writing uniquely yours. I've found that while having close friends and relatives critique my writing can be fun, it's not always helpful since most aren't familiar with punctuation, character development, and plot, plus they don't want to disappoint me with critical comments. They are usually kind enough that they only encourage and brag on my work. But what you really need is someone a little more qualified to point out your flaws, suggest solutions, and comment favorably on the parts that they like.

I'm only going to suggest critique groups I've used in the past. But I will warn you upfront, not all critiques will be helpful, some might hurt your feelings and have no basis for what they say,  some will be excellent with great suggestions, and I've also received critiques by people who like to read and write, but aren't at the place I'd like them to be as far as writing and critiquing knowledge.

Scribophile

Scribophile is probably my favorite, of the ones I've tried. There are several ways to post your writing.  You can also join a critique group, for instance, a picture book or science fiction group. By doing that you are more likely to receive critiques by people who are more familiar with your genre.

Scribophile also runs contests which can be fun, if that's something that appeals to you.

The way to get your story critiqued is to earn karma. You earn karma points by writing critiques for others and also by having them react positively to your critiques. You can earn more karma for critiquing a story in one of the spotlights. And the longer the critique, the more karma you'll receive. Then you spend your earned karma by posting one of your stories. If your story is short, you will probably post the entire thing, otherwise, you might post chapter by chapter so that it won't exceed their suggested limit of words.

I haven't used this site for some time so you might want to learn more about Scribophile by clicking here.

Critique Circle

Critique Circle is another group I've joined in the past. Like many groups, you earn credits by critiquing other stories. Then with your earned credits, you are able to post your work to be critiqued.  Since only a certain number are posted each week, you may have to get in a queue and wait a little while. Again, like most groups, by critiquing stories that come up each week you will earn credits to use in posting your work.

When you join Critique Circle you get some free credits which you can use toward the cost of posting your first story, which will be in the Newbie group. You then have a choice of specifying who can critique you stories, which is a good thing, since as I mentioned earlier some critiquers enjoy reading but aren't going to be too helpful.

Again, it's been a little while since I've posted here, so you might want to see if any of these facts have changed.

SCBWI

Society of Children's Writers & Illustrators is another great group to join. While this is not a free group, they offer lots of avenues for the writer or illustrator of children's literature. Whether you are interested in meeting critiquers in person or online, you should be able to find a group.

SCBWI is a wonderful place to find an exchange of knowledge between writers, illustrators, editors, publishers, agents, librarians, educators, booksellers and others involved with literature for young people. There are currently more than 22,000 members worldwide.

Its members get benefits such as:

- The SCBWI sponsors two annual International Conferences on Writing and Illustrating for Children
- The spectacular SCBWI regions offer dozens of regional conferences and events throughout the world. 
- The quarterly magazine, SCBWI Bulletin, offers thousands of dollars in Awards and Grants for writers and illustrators and provides market information on the craft and business of writing and selling books for young readers.
- SCBWI's The Book provides up-to-the-minute publishing information for children's publishing, including literary agent directories, book reviewer directories, "How-to" articles on query letters, getting started in children's publishing and much more!
- Discounts on literature subscriptions and more.
Check out their site: SCBWI.

I'm sure there are many more critique groups, but I only feel comfortable posting about the ones I've been involved with. I hope if a group is what you're looking for, that this information has been helpful.






Tuesday, October 24, 2017

The Monstore - Great For This Time Of Year

While not a new book, The Monstore written by Tara Lazar and illustrated by James Burks is a fun read for this time of year.

At the back of the candy shoppe, under the last box of sour gum balls, there is a trap door. Knock five times fast, hand over a bag of squirmy worms and you may enter the Monstore. A store where only the most useful monsters are sold, ones that do tricky things around the house. Zack checks out the Monstore to find a monster to keep his sister Gracie from snooping around his room.

But there may be one problem: No returns, no exchanges, no exceptions at the Monstore.

The illustrations are bright and fun. There is more text than usual but I think the story will have no problem holding a child's attention. There is no reference to Halloween, but it feels appropriate for this time of year.

Aladdin Publishing
Publication Date: 2013
Ages: 4-7

Tuesday, October 10, 2017

Hotel Bruce by Ryan T. Higgins

Though I was somewhat reluctant to read Mother Bruce by Ryan T. Higgins, I'm so glad I went ahead and read it. Otherwise, I would have missed out on a fun series of books.



Hotel Bruce by Ryan T. Higgins is an absolutely wonderful picture book for both adults and kids. As I've mentioned before, if a picture book doesn't appeal to an adult, it makes it pretty hard to keep picking it up and reading it over and over to a child.

After our grumpy Bruce-the-Bear ends up adopting goslings quite by accident in the book Mother Bruce, he is now having to take on parental duties. In this case, it means he needs to take his new charges on their migration to Miami each year. It's a tiring trip and he longs for the peace and quiet of home. Instead, when he returns he finds his den turned into a forest hotel run by a trio of mice. He suffers possum pillow fights, a fox trying to eat their guests and a moose hogging his bed.  Finally, when a bus full of new guests arrive he takes charge of the situation.

The illustrations are extremely well done. The emotions expressed by each animal can't help but make a reader smile. 

I highly recommend this one, and can't wait to read Bruce's Big Move.

Disney - Hyperion
Published 2016
Ages: 4-7

Sunday, October 8, 2017

The Bear Who Stared by Duncan Beedie

The Bear Who Stared by Duncan Beedie is a cute book with a good lesson. When bear stares at different forest animals they don't like the way it makes them feel. But in time bear learns a better way than staring at animals when he doesn't know what do say. This new method works much better and even gets some positive responses, rather than negative.

This would be a good book for teachers to share with their students.

A Man of His Own by Susan Wilson

With all my writing, picture book reviews, and now helping reclaim a rental property that a tenant mistook for her property to destroy, I've managed to sneak in listening to an adult book: A Man of His Own, by Susan Wilson. Rick Stanton is a baseball player on the verge of a promising career in the major league when he stumbles upon a German Shepherd mix puppy who needs rescuing. Rick names the puppy Pax. This special dog plays a large part in the story, but the book consists of much more than a dog's love for his master. Pearl Harbor and the entry of the USA into WWII changes the course of Rick’s life, which in turn impacts the lives of those surrounding him. This wonderful story about canine devotion and adult relationships has some unexpected twists and great character development. I certainly plan to read, or listen, to more of Susan Wilson's work.

Thursday, September 28, 2017

Lots of Reading - Lots of Learning


Lately, I feel like I’ve read and reviewed a kazillion picture books, give or take a thousand.  My husband and dog, Bentley, have been very understanding since I've moved from my office to the dining room table where it's easier to spread out and deal with piles and piles of books. (Picture above is just the latest stack of books.) But I’m learning so much by reading all these books. You might think the obvious is that there is no rhyme or reason why certain books get published. And that thought has occurred to me.


But I’m not worried about the few that I  have to shake my head and wonder . . . why?  What I’m finding is that most of the books I’m reviewing are good and they are character driven.

Character-Driven
Wendy Silvano describes Character Driven: A character-driven picture book is just what it says—a picture book where the character drives the plot. Think of it this way: In a character-driven picture book the story is more about the character than about the plot. What happens in the story happens because of the attitudes, personality and character traits of the main character.
Below are two books that I love, both good examples of Character Driven.

I probably will be posting a few more picture book reviews, or maybe a kazillion, give or take a thousand. And since I find it pretty hard to hold back my personal thoughts, don't look for cut and dried reviews. As usual, posts will be sprinkled with a little bit of me. 

Wednesday, September 27, 2017

This is NOT a Cat!


At mouse school, the students' first lesson is to recognize danger. And that would mean cat-danger. Different pictures are shown to the students. Each pointing out what a cat is not. The lesson is interrupted by what appears to be a real cat sneaking into the classroom.  But there are a couple of surprise endings to this simple little story.

I can imagine young ones loving this book. There are few words, but not many are necessary. And for a child who is learning to read, all of the words used in the story are the same five words used in the title.

This is Not a Cat by David Larochelle and illustrated by Mike Wohnoutka is definitely a book worth your time.

Sterling Children's Books
Sterling Publishing Company 2016
Ages: 3-6

Tuesday, September 26, 2017

New Picture Book - Available October 2017


Cinderella and the Furry Slippers by Davide Cali is a story with a twist on the Cinderella we know. Seeing a picture of the Prince in a magazine prompts Cinderella to want to go to the ball, meet the Prince, and have a fairytale ending. She calls a Fairy Godmother who dresses her since she has nothing appropriate to wear. But what she ends up with isn’t the dress of her dreams. Unlike the story we are used to, her carriage is a turnip with a variety of strange animals pulling it to the castle. And even the castle is not what she imagined. Furry slippers and all the Prince falls for her, but she immediately sees that the Prince is not her type, so she dashes from the ball.
*Spoiler Alert*
On the way home (she has to walk since her turnip coach is nowhere to be found) she sees a sign offering women career opportunities. So she decides to create her own ending to the story.

While I certainly understand the concept of this story, I have a few concerns. Perhaps I’m being overly sensitive, but Cinderella’s immediate dislike for the Prince appeared to be his bad breath. The fashion presented, and coach and animals were fun, but I think were intended to be a message. The dancing at the ball was pretty weird and Cinderella's was simply the worst of all. (Meant to be funny or a message?) One of the signs at the Job Fair is  “Sick of lame princes? Sick of fancy pink dresses? Want to do something fun for once?” Pink and dresses and believing in love and a Prince can be a fun fantasy for kids. My opinion is kids need to be kids for a few years. I agree with the fact that people, both men and women, should not sit back and wait helplessly for their future to unwind, but this book felt more adult based, with an adult message.

Many of the illustrations are very cute. And I do think this book can be used as a positive tool to help empower both boys and girls. I just wanted to point out a few of my rather small concerns.
Penguin Random House Canada
Tundra Books 2017
Age Range: 3-7

Saturday, September 23, 2017

The Thing Lou Couldn't Do - Picture Book Review


The Thing Lou Couldn't Do by Ashley Spires is a good book for encouraging discussions on  A), some things take lots of work to achieve and B), you may not be able to achieve some things even if you work really hard. That last part isn't pointed out in the book, but the story opens the door to that conversation. As adults too often we say, "You can be anything you want to be," to kids. But in reality we can't be anything. You can work to achieve something and get better, but dreams need to be realistic and many times luck has to be present. As an example, I could never have become a great basketball player, no matter how hard I tried, since nothing about me is coordinated and I'm 5'2". Okay, enough. You get the picture. I'm sure I've overthought this great little picture book! But, as you can tell,  it touched on one of my pet peeves.

When Lou and her friends play they pretend they are brave adventurers, faster than airplanes, build mighty fortresses, etc. She is sure she will be a race-car driver, pirate or deep-sea diver some day. But when her friends decide to climb a tree and play games up there, Lou is not sure. She has never climbed a tree. Her friends encourage her to at least try, but she begins to make excuses such as her arm is sore, her cat needs to be taken on a walk, and even that she stepped on a slug earlier that day and his funeral is in five minutes. When her friends offer to help her climb the tree she is cross and wants them to leave her alone. As the friends continue to play, Lou fantasizes about ways she can get up in the tree without climbing. Finally, it's time for her to buck-up and make the attempt. No more excuses. But it isn't easy for her. Will she make it up the tree?

The illustrations are creative and funny at times. And as I mentioned earlier, the story offers a good opportunity to discuss future dreams.
  • Kids Can Press 2017

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Thursday, September 21, 2017

Wednesday, September 20, 2017

Great Picture Book - Will Make You Smile

I suppose it's not politically correct to say I wasn't too sure about this book when I saw the title. But trust me, this is a book you and your kids will love.

Mother Bruce by Ryan T. Higgins is about Bruce, a bear that likes to keep to himself. He doesn't like sunny days, rainy days and above all cute little animals. You wouldn't be wrong to think he could be nominated for grump of the forest. But there is one thing Bruce does like: eggs. However, one fateful day the unexpected happens after his search for eggs, salmon, and honey. The eggs hatch! And Bruce becomes the victim of mistaken identity.

Not until lately have I found such great author/illustrators. What adult and child wouldn't laugh when there is an illustration of Bruce taking the hatched geese back to Mrs. Goose in a shopping basket no less. He wants to check out her return policy!

I'm so glad I didn't let my misconceived notions regarding the title keep me from reading this book. I would easily rate it 5 stars. And I plan to read more books by Ryan T. Higgins.

  • Disney Hyperion 2016

Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Grumpy Frog

While this book's text and illustrations are simple, there are many things that can be discussed after reading this story.  Grumpy Frog by Ed Vere starts with a happy frog that loves winning, hopping, and the color green. All other colors can easily turn him from happy to grumpy. But pink is his all-time worst color. While his friends are just fine with all colors, his reluctance to accept anything but green leaves him unable to join his friends when they are swimming (blue water), bouncing (yellow trampoline) and enjoying other things together. Frog holds tight to his thinking that all colors except green just don’t work for him and cause him to be grumpy. So he sits alone. Without friends. Convincing himself that he is fine. But will something help him change his mind? Or will he remain strong regarding his thoughts and feelings? And is there even a legitimate reason to feel happy and grumpy?

Though it is a very simple story with few words, the depth of discussion can be branched out in several layers and directions. And for very young children it can even be used to help identify colors.
This book was received by me and reviewed on NetGalley.
Publisher: Puffin 2017

Monday, September 18, 2017

Lion Lessons

At the risk of sounding repetitive, I'm really excited to be finding so many good picture books to share. Lion Lessons by Jon Agee is one of the books at the top of my recommended list.

This book is so cute. But when I say that, it takes both text and good illustrations to make a picture book work. And this has both. When a little boy takes Lion Lessons he falls short of the teacher's expectations (a lion). His frightening poses and roar, among other things, just don't cut it. Will the boy pass the class? It doesn't look too promising. But maybe something will happen to warrant acting the part of a lion?

The illustrations are wonderful for both kids and adults since adult humor is thrown in here and there: Harvard School of Claw, the menu the lion shows to the boy, etc.

I totally recommend this since it should appeal to both adults (who get the privilege of reading these books over and over) and children.
Dial Books for Young Readers, A division of Penguin Young Readers Group 2016

Sunday, September 17, 2017

Stranger Danger


While it's disappointing that we find it necessary to teach "stranger danger", it doesn't appear to be something we can wish away. Fairytales Gone Wrong: Who's Bad and Who's Good, Little Red Riding Hood? by Steve Smallman and illustrated by Neil Price is a wonderful teaching tool.

When Little Red Riding Hood is asked to deliver cupcakes and soup to her grandma she is instructed to stay on the path and avoid talking to strangers. Then she is told to yell, tell a policeman or a person in a shop if she needs help. Of course, who should she meet but a wolf. New to the story, however, is a rabbit. And there is where the real story begins. The illustrations, colorful and fun, totally add to the story.

One thing both parents and teachers should like is the fact that the last page has some great discussion questions.
QED Publishing 2016

Saturday, September 16, 2017

Creating a Picture Book


As many parents know, it's terrible when a child loves a certain picture book but you have to mentally groan at the prospect of reading it one more time. I remember my mom laughing about a certain picture book that my daughter always wanted her to read. In retrospect, that book should have disappeared, although it was quite a popular title at the time. (I'm so glad we didn't have it at our house!)

One of the hard things a picture book author has to deal with is creating a book that is appealing to both adults and children. Although it seems like kids are pretty forgiving; it's the adults who can be hard to figure out. When I read a picture book and check the reviews, more often than not I'm pretty shocked. A book that I would easily mark as one star or less might be rated four or five stars by many reviewers. And of course, that works both ways. 

I've always found it helpful to read what's being published, but I've never done it to the degree I have lately. Surprisingly, I'm finding that many of the current books are very good. Something I haven't been able to say in the past.

I'd like to share some information that I hope is helpful, if you're planning on writing a picture book. How to Create a Fantastic Picture Book by Emma Blackburn. And this excerpt from Writing Picture Books by Ann Whitford Paul.

While many think writing a picture book is pretty easy, and admittedly some books look like they . . . well, that's another story. But I'm finding it's hard to pass the test of trying to please agents, publishers, parents, and kids.

But it can be fun trying . . . 

Dragons: Father and Son

I promised I would be posting lots of recommended picture books, so I didn't want to let you down!

While Dragons: Father and Son by Alexandre Lacroix felt a little wordy the first time I read it, the second read through it felt just right. I think all of the text was necessary to the story.  There was only one part of the book that I really questioned, and that was when the son slightly stretched the truth when he returned to his Father.

When Father Dragon asks his son to go out and burn some of the village, which is a tradition in growing up, his son sets out to do just that. But the first house has a little boy looking out the window. It just doesn't seem right to destroy the house for no good reason, especially when the little boy races out of the house, delighted to see a real live dragon! But the boy has an idea, they can go burn down the schoolhouse, especially since he hasn't finished his homework.  As the story progresses the son is forced to evaluate tradition and whether he wants to return and disappoint his Father.

The illustrations add to the story with their colorful depiction of all the characters. And of course, dragons should be of interest to boys, for sure. Even though the book will appeal to girls, too.

The story itself can be read just for fun, but there is an obvious message that can be discussed. This is a good classroom read or individual book to share.
QED Publishing 2017

Thursday, September 14, 2017

Another Book to Share!



I was excited to read another picture book by one of my favorite publishers: Kids Can Press.  Not all picture books meet everyone's criteria,  but I find most of their books click with my need for humor and great illustrations.

While the story of The Tiny Tale of Little Pea by Davide Cali, illustrated by Sebastian Mourrain, is not necessarily a humorous one,  the wonderful illustrations make you smile.  As you might guess,  The Tiny Tale of Little Pea is about a teeny-tiny baby.  A baby boy who wears discarded doll shoes, learns to swim in the sink and enjoys tightrope walking over the waste basket.  There are many cute illustrations showing him loving life in spite of his size.  That is until he starts school.  By comparison,  not much goes right for him at school,  so he sits alone drawing. We then move to Little Pea as a grown up,  which mainly means age not stature. He has a house,  but can he find a job?

This is a fun book just to enjoy reading,  but most would be remiss not to talk about acceptance of "different" people,  and the thought that hopefully all of us can find a place to put our talents and gifts to work.

I received this copy from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. If you follow my posts at all, you know that's the only type of review I seem capable of writing. Which sometimes might not be a good thing! :-)

Kids Can Press 2017

Wednesday, September 13, 2017

Two New Books To Share

I had every intention of posting information about writing this time, but I'm reading so many great picture books that I think that's what I'll be sharing for a little while.


Grumpy Pants, illustrated and written by Clair Messer, is a very simple book about a penguin who is in a grumpy mood, something everyone deals with at one time or another. This book has very few words on each page, allowing children to focus on the cute illustrations depicting Penguin's grumpy attitude. This book feels geared to a young audience. But the lesson really applies to everyone: It's okay to be grumpy; the important thing is how we handle grumpiness.
And Penguin finds a way that works for him.

Albert Whitman & Company 2016


Giggle, Giggle, Quack by Doreen Cronin and illustrated by Betsy Lewin is for sure a winner! This time Duck has found a pencil. When Farmer Brown asks his brother to watch the farm while he goes on vacation, Duck makes sure that Bob, Farmer Brown's brother, gets some interesting instructions regarding taking care of the animals. The animals enjoy pizza that Bob orders in for them, and Bob is instructed to wash the pigs with bubble bath and to dry them off with Farmer Brown's good towels. The animals are having a great time with the instructions Duck has created, but how long can it last?

Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers

Since I'm finding such good books, watch for my next post. I'll have two or three more to share.

Monday, September 4, 2017

Dog On A Frog?


The library must think I'm running a preschool. I've been reading stacks and stacks of picture books for two reasons. One, I want to see what is being published. Two, I love sharing books with other readers.

Dog On A Frog? by Kes & Claire Gray and illustrated by Jim Field is a book I think kids will love. The cute rhymes and humorous illustrations are perfect for reading aloud with PreK-2.

It all starts when Frog has a problem with dogs sitting on frogs. But when cat agrees that dogs sit on frogs, Frog decides to change the rules. "From now on, dogs sit on logs, and not frogs!" And so the rhyming begins. The book is filled with illustrations that all kids should love and a fun ending.

Published 2016 by Scholastic Press

Sunday, August 27, 2017

Too Many Carrots


Not often am I able to post recommended picture books right after the other. But this book feels age appropriate for young children (lower end, as well as many who are older, will appreciate it), and the illustrations are very cute.

While rabbit starts out somewhat preoccupied with his own selfish concerns of loving carrots and not knowing where to store all of them, toward the end we see that "Rabbit felt terrible. His friends were cold, tired, and homeless, and it was all his fault." I think he does realize his mistakes and knows there is only one thing to do.

Too Many Carrots, written and illustrated by Katy Hudson is a good story with fun illustrations.
Capstone Young Readers, 2016


Saturday, August 26, 2017

New Picture Book to Share


Most picture books don't live up to my expectations. In fact, it can get pretty disappointing as I read book after book. But when I find a good one, I'm pretty excited to post it.  This picture book, though for a little older child (not most three and four-year-olds), is definitely worth sharing. The illustrations are exceptionally good, and most adults won't tire of reading it with children.

It's All About Me-ow, written and illustrated by Hudson Talbott is about Buddy, the resident house cat, giving advice to three kittens who are joining the family. Buddy's personality is fun and the book is filled with hilarious illustrations. There are diagrams comparing humans and cats, a timeline of cat history, and lots of advice for the new kittens such as training humans to sit and stay and fetch feline toys. Many of the illustrations will no doubt make you laugh out loud. I loved the advice on how to remind humans that it's dinner time and if the cat decides to dine out what is okay to eat. Gerbil: no. Rat: yes. Fish in a bowl: no.

I think this is a book you'll want to take a look at.
Published 2012 by Nancy Paulsen Books - A division of Penguin Young Readers Group


Wednesday, August 16, 2017

uPS and DOwns of Writing



Research
Create
Finding a Publisher
Repeat

My writing career has been like traveling through the years on a bumpy roller coaster.  I started by sending my writing to magazines. Over the course of a few years, I had over thirty stories/filler published. However, my earnings added up to about enough to purchase one large coffee (but certainly not Starbucks)! I then decided it would be exciting to have a book published. The thought of having my name on a hardcover book was enough to cause me to dance on my desktop. Okay, maybe that's a bit of an exaggeration. With time my memory has faded some. But I did get a book published and it was a hardcover. But, the excitement was short-lived. The publisher soon closed their doors. Not just to me. As in closed for business.

Chapter Two. I signed a contract with a new publisher for a very short book to accompany their reading series. I was later excited to sign a contract with them for a full-length middle reader. But. That word seems to always interrupt my happiness as an author. When that publisher discovered that I had attained an agent, they stopped replying to my correspondence completely. After talking with legal aid, I gave the whole thing up and went to step 4 above.

Chapter Three. I located another publisher. At the time I was blinded by my desire to be published and their love for my writing. I didn't notice that their publishing house was built out of cards and not long for this world. And, as the saying goes, hindsight is 20/20.  I began to see the red flags as they slowly climbed the flag pole. Four books later that publisher closed their doors.

Chapter Four. Yes! After licking my wounds I located yet another publisher. I signed a contract on a picture book. He then began sending me illustrations that were being made for the book. But. . . the publisher then decided to go another direction since he decided picture books were too costly, etc. etc.  
I picked myself up off the floor and located a new publisher who published my latest book. But. Oh, no, there's that nasty word. I got an email that they are closing this month. I'm very sad, not just for me, but for them. 

Chapter Five. I'm busy doing my four-step program above. And of course, it's fun. Why? Because my passion is reading, creating, finding a publisher, and . . . 

If you share that passion, I have some informational sites for you to take a look at.













Sunday, August 13, 2017

Recommended Middle Grade Novel

     I've posted very few Middle Grade Novels that I would recommend. Partly because I don't read them that often, but mostly I haven't found many that I care to pass on. My last posting was A Million Ways Home by Dianna Dorisi Winget. If you haven't read it, be sure to pick up a copy.
     I'm so excited to have found another great book to share: Fish in a Tree by Lynda Mullaly Hunt.

          This book is about finding true friends, bravery, second chances, about asking for help when you need it, and offering help when you see it is needed. It's about struggling with something in school (dyslexia) but realizing at the same time that you are not stupid, but have amazing gifts and talents.
            I loved the fact that Lynda Mullaly Hunt tied so many aspects of the story together. I loved the sentence structure and short chapters (since the book is so long). I loved the characters but at the same time felt a bit uncomfortable with them. Many of the characters felt exaggerated and like stereotypes. (But even with that possible downfall, I did still like them.) I was also concerned that a sixth grader had slipped through the education system without someone realizing her true problem, fairly unlikely in this day and age. 

I know it sounds like I've given several negatives, but the positives totally outweighed the concerns for me. Give it a try and let me know what you think.


   

       


Another Winning Picture Book

If you've been following any of my posts on Goodreads, you know I'm pretty hard on my ratings of picture books. Many books don't seem cute, clever, kid-friendly vocabularies, good text, fun illustrations . . . . Need I go on? I can't tell you how many books I have to read to find one I like. Of course, I'm always interested to see if others agree with me so I check reviews. I'm constantly shocked at the books rated at five stars that I would rate one star. Although I don't. That seems downright mean. But alas, after reading many, many books I found another to share. If You Ever Want to Bring a Circus to the Library. Don't by Elise Parsley is a winner. After reading a poster at the library saying, You can do anything at the library, Magnolia decides to take a circus there. As Magnolia performs acrobatics, she reminds her audience to hold their applause, because you can do anything at the library except clap. But there might have been one important thing Magnolia missed when she read the poster. And it might have even helped if she'd been paying attention during story time at the library. Bright, fun illustration. A book most adults won't quickly tire of reading to a child multiple times.

Sunday, August 6, 2017

Dear Publishers . . .



Ever feel like you dive into something you love, but find you're just treading water? I think many people don't realize how hard it is to break into the writing world. I've silently laughed when I hear people say, "Well, after retirement I think I'll write a book and see if I can't get it published." For some, it's about that easy (though I don't think many). For others, lots of time is spent swimming a few strokes then being dragged back by the current.

I tend to fall in the latter group. After hard work, I find a publisher then manage to watch the business fold like it's made of a deck of playing cards.

So far I've been standing inside when two publishers close their doors. And yesterday I received a very nice letter from my newest publisher saying they will be closing at the end of August.

Once again, I will take the dive, since writing is my passion. But if you are a member of Scholastic Press, Harper, Philomel Books, or Little Brown and Company, will you please watch for wonderful stories submitted by Debbie Shakespeare Smith? I promise to do my best to keep the cards standing in an upright position!

Friday, August 4, 2017

Lily and Bear Grumpy Feet

I am posting this picture book mainly because of the cute illustrations.  I thought the story was just okay, but the illustrations overshadowed any short comings in the text. I think most children will really enjoy the book.

Lily loves to draw, but one morning Lily finds herself out of sorts: nothing is quite right. The day is too rainy, the teapot too dribbly. Even her pencils are too pointy. It is clear nothing will be right until Lily draws . . . bear!

Lily and Bear Grumpy Feet by Lisa Stubbs is definitely worth checking out.


Monday, July 31, 2017

Picture Books: Character or Plot-Driven


I’ve been sending out my picture book manuscript to several agents and at the same time reviewing some newer, published picture books. A few books are very good, and those are the ones I try to share on my blog. But if you've noticed, I haven't been sharing very many. This is only my opinion regarding picture books, but I still say it's hard to find a good one.
Most of us are familiar with this type of picture book:
Plot-Driven
Setup- Tells a little bit about the characters and maybe the setting.

Problem- Something the main character needs to solve.

Attempt to Solve- Picture books typically will have three attempts.

Try. Fail.

Try. Fail.

Try. Fail.

Drum Roll-Moment of overcoming or solving the problem. 

Resolution- Wrapping up loose ends, and showing positive consequences.  

More and more picture books seem to be drawing away from Plot-Driven and moving toward Character-Driven.
A Character-Driven Book (be it a child or an animal), is about the main character’s wants, dreams, hopes, plans, problems, and more. These are characters the reader comes to care about, root for, and relate to. The author of character-driven stories needs to understand the main character’s motivations, weakness,  strengths, inspirations, internal struggles. . . well, the author needs to know the character just about as well as he knows himself.
In summary, a Plot-Driven Story features a sequence of events in which the protagonist fights to attain a goal. Character-Driven: A unique and fun character makes internal changes.
You can Google to find examples of each type of book, which can be helpful.


Friday, July 7, 2017

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Thursday, July 6, 2017

Surprise! Another Picture Book Post


The animals on the farm are preparing to celebrate a birthday. But duckling isn't quite sure how to prepare for a birthday party since he's never experienced one. The sheep are snippity-clipping, the chickens are shimmy-shaking. But what should duckling be doing?

Not only did I choose to post this book because it's cute, but also to show that not all books (as I'm sure you know) follow the rules that authors are taught to use when writing. You may want to refer to my previous post regarding feedback that I received from an agent on one of my picture book manuscripts. The bold print indicates recommendations to my manuscript. The regular print refers to Click, Clack, Surprise!.

  • I needed "more suspense in the beginning" 
    • There is some suspense in the beginning of Click, Clack, but minimal
  • I needed "tension with higher stakes in the middle"
    • no tension (that I could tell)
  • I needed "more character growth"
    • if duckling grew it was on the last page
  • While I didn't post anything about this earlier, as authors we are always told to have the main character solve his/her own problem.
    • character growth only on last page
So, while I wholeheartedly recommend Click, Clack, Surprise!, I wanted to point out that if you have a certain feel and love for what you are creating, don't immediately dismiss it because it doesn't follow the guidelines you've been taught. One of the best examples of this is the Harry Potter series. This book didn't sell quickly, but when it did it flew to the top of the charts and exceeded all expectations.

My thoughts are to follow the guidelines, but if your heart says to veer off the path, I say Go For It!